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StarF68
99 songs but a hit ain't one.

Age 34, Male

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Minnesota

Joined on 10/17/03

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I'll leave the first comment :)

Why thank you.

Now if I could just get some useful comments. XD

My favorite line: "... And even though things have changed, a couple details rearranged, the paradigm has yet to shift."

Allow me to respond:

I see your persuit and I see your perfection,
But it's left me disputing your lack of reflection.
Though, I'll freely admit that I like the direction
of the thoughts you submit for my introspection.

I can't help but wonder who it is you're waiting for;
if perfection, your blunder: man always wants more.
So when you find the woman to antithesize your bore
keep in mind my ill-omen on this user page of yours.

It's not that you can't love for who someone is,
it's that you'd, askant, see a 'Miss' when it's 'Ms.'
So you understand if I'm loving the irony: 'tis
how you'll wait endlessly--be an hourglass whiz.

Why thank you so much, this reply is appreciated
As before all of them are, this much I have stated
But yours more than normal, I enjoyed then contemplated
The words that you left upon this poem I've created

The girl in question is no mystery, I know her quite well
Countless numbers of memories and endless stories to tell
The past a conundrum, it didn't end all too swell
But thanks to new circumstances, for her again I fell

Forewarning to myself: distance puts a stopper on this
For how can we survive when there's 600 miles between our kiss?
Though I can't help myself from waiting because I know love exists
But I do keep on wondering: What if I fall victim to the abyss?

Once again I must say, thank you so much for your insight
But I think I'm going to bed, I'm too tired to think right
And I have to get up early, so at least I'll rest easy tonight
Until tomorrow when I will be forced to surrender to the light!